Hello everyone! I have been working very hard on my latest story, called Hyperfocus. Could you please give it a read and share any and all feedback with me? If you like it, you can preorder my upcoming anthology here.
S.E., I loved "Hyperfocus." It builds beautifully until you feel trapped along with those who cannot escape its whisteling clutches. Everytime a program opens and offer me an A.I. assistance, I automatically kill it. LOL. Thanks for a great read.
Hello everyone! I have been working very hard on my latest story, called Hyperfocus. Could you please give it a read and share any and all feedback with me? If you like it, you can preorder my upcoming anthology here.
Thank you very much!
Literally laughed out loud.
Wait... first it was visuals and now audio?
*it's evolving*
IT'S LEARNING
OH MY GOD
S.E., I loved "Hyperfocus." It builds beautifully until you feel trapped along with those who cannot escape its whisteling clutches. Everytime a program opens and offer me an A.I. assistance, I automatically kill it. LOL. Thanks for a great read.
Didn't see the ending coming! (Thought it was going elsewhere) Loved it.
Loving this! Mysterywagon is a whole vibe lol 😂
I'm officially obsessed with your tech horror stories. This is brilliant.
Dude.
Myaterywagon just over here watching the world burn one gym at a time. 😂
This was so creepy in the best way, Sally!
Excellent
Love it!
So creepy! Excellent
Too real.
This story is so fun. Not usually the kind of thing I read, but I'm so glad I did. Loved it. (I love your other stuff, too).
When I write something I want it to be something the likes of which no one's ever seen--in ideas, tension, etc. THIS is such! Well done.
A very creative story. A comment on our apathy towards ai perhaps? Still a bop though.
O yeah, love this dark side!