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Nicole's avatar

There's horror in this slice, pain and grief and horror.

The stranger's avatar

Shaken by the vivid description in this piece.

Beautiful!

WiseWomanWickedTongue's avatar

Haunting. You did a beautiful job of describing losing a person.

stabilise's avatar

Thank you.

Maria Matheou's avatar

This is a haunting piece on the horrors of substances abuse and what it steals from people.

Elijah Westin's avatar

My heart. This is devastating but beautiful..

stabilise's avatar

Thank you, Elijah.

Labyrinthia Mythweaver's avatar

Devastating. It aches. But beautifully written.

stabilise's avatar

Thank you 😊

Nick Hills's avatar

the ending is devastating, great work, Fatima!

stabilise's avatar

Thanks, Nick. Have a great one 💫

Mara Ellison's avatar

Ouch. This hits.

✨️NightLure✨️'s avatar

Still shaken. This really got to me.

How much we take for granted, and all in the blink of an eye.

Very, very well done. 🤍

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stabilise's avatar

Thanks, HVR ✨