Hey there!

My name is SpicyFox and normally I write German story's. Out of a mood i just tried to translate a story and now I want to know what do you think about the quality. My English is not that good but i tried my best rewriting it in english.

The story chapter is like an intro for a bigger mainly yiff based story with many different mons but first i have to know if it's worth the effort to translate it. So, what do you think? How bad is my English writing. "Can't do" bad, or more like "just started writing" bad. Tell me after what do you think and if you want to read more. Oh and, no this chapter has no yiff, sry guys <\^v^/>.

Garden Eden, from SpicyFox

Seduction

Musingly Cyres view roamed while passing the Trains window. He looked worried and that's how he caught his partners attention.

“Everything alright?"

The question came from a female Lucario which, unlikely most other Pokémon, has the ability to talk to Humans.

He startled out of his thoughts and looked at her.

“Yea, just a little nervous. After all its my first time."

“Don't worry. According to our source, the subject is already familiar with the matter. Just follow the plan and there should be no problem gaining her trust. After that, it will be breeze. Stay positive and it will be ok."

Cy nodded approvingly.

The plan looked pretty simple. But theory is one thing, practice another. Cassandra, the Lucario knew she couldn't convince him yet, so she tried a new approach and gave him a tender lick on his neck.

“Don't worry." She repeated. “Everything will be alright."

 His resistance broke at her beautiful smile and he couldn't resist to return it to her.

One hour later the two of them reached the destination. It was a big station but crowded thanks to technicality issue with one of the trains. The more surprisingly, it was no problem finding the contact person which spotted them the target subject.

“There she is, the young Lady with the Jolteon. Are you ready to offer her a good show?"

One last time Cy gathered courage with a glance to the Lucario, then he nodded.

Shortly after, all preparations where set and a show-fight was announced which quickly got the attention of all surrounding people. Especially people who got stuck here cause of the train issue like Lucy, the target subject. The location was also perfectly selected to give her a good view of the fight which completely captured her attention.

It was an astonishing good-looking performance, but no one even noticed that is was actually a farce for the real object which started right at the moment the fight was over. Slightly tired but happy, Cassandra moved to Cy who greeted her with a warm hug for her good work. Then the shifty Lucario paused. Always with an unremarkable look at Lucy to catch the right moment until suddenly she kissed Cyres.

It was just a casual kiss on his cheek that no one really noticed. Just a Pokémon that is a little too affectionate to her trainer, right? But this little message didn't miss the Point.

Lucy, who already went one step farther with her Jolteon then just kissing was captured from this picture. You could tell by one little gaze at her that her mind was spinning wild with fantasy's. Affectionately she fondled her Jolteon which stretched his head out of pleasure.

“Did it work?" Cy whispered to Cassandra with his back to Lucy.

She smiled.

“We got her trust."

Then, some minutes passed and just before Lucy had a chance to disappear in the crowd, Cy approached to her.

“Excuse me, do you know by any chance when the next train to Jotho arrives?"

Surprised she turned to him, not expected to see him again so early. But at the same time her heart skipped a beat out of joy because she got the chance to talk to him.

“Aem, sorry, the next train is canceled. Looks like we stuck here for some time."

“Oh, that's stupide." He acted while patting the Lucario. “Well, do you wana join me and Cassandra in the Café?"

Lucy hesitated for a moment. Normally she wouldn't just accept an offer like this from a person she didn't even knew. But her curiosity about Cy's relationship with his Pokémon won and sometime later they found a nice and relatively quiet seat for some Smalltalk.

Ten Minutes passed, then twenty and Cyres started being nervous. There was no good opportunity to change the topic until Lucy started to feed her Jolteon with some of her cake.

“You really do like you Jolteon, right?"

“Yea, he's my everything." Her answer came without hesitation and sounded like she memorized it. Like she didn't want to tell to much out of fear, someone could reveal her dark secret.

“I also couldn't life without my Cas. I just Love her."

It felt funny for Cy to say something like that. He met Cas not even a week ago and her relationship was just business. He really liked her but to say something like that just to gain Lucys trust didn't felt right. However, Cassandra just snuggled against Cyres to answer his sweet words.

Lucy almost choked on her cake hearing his words. He just said it like it was nothing. At the same time, she rechecked if, maybe she just overreacted. Maybe someone normal wouldn't interpret his words to a Pokémon like she did. Dammed, she couldn't tell anymore. This thing between her and her Jolteon was going on for to long to tell what is normal anymore.

But then Cassandras Voice interrupted Lucys thoughts.

“I told you not to say something like that. At least not in front of other people."

Now Lucy couldn't hide her feelings anymore. She blushed and didn't even know what question she should ask first.

“You can speak?"

It was the only question she could thing of that hadn't a context of 'are you two humping each other'.

Cassandra only nodded shy so Cy Continued the conversation.

“Do you also think I shouldn't say something like that?"

“I-I don't know." She had absolutely no idea how to answer it.

“I want to be honest with you. I watched you and your Jolteon some moments ago and I think you two have something in common with me and Cas. So, I want to tell you a secret."

“What kind of secret?" She asked skeptical.

But he didn't answer right away. First, he took out a black business card and put it on the table. 'Garden Eden' was on it engraved. It looked expensive and luxurious.

“This is a place, not far from here on a small peninsula. Only invited people are allowed and I would gladly invite you."

Still skeptical but also kind of curious she looked at the card.

“And what is it that makes this place so special?"

“Easy said, it's a place where Humans and Pokémon can life together with equal rights. I life there together with Cas and its like a dream in comparison to the rest of the world. Of course, you don't have to life there, but I would advice you to, at least visit for an induction. If you don't like it, you could still see it as a short holiday and leave but it's a really nice place.

“And what do you get for inviting me?"

Lucy didn't believe him at all. He sounded like one of these hoover sheller who just want her to buy some crappy product. So, Cassandra helped Cy a bit.

“It is probably hard to believe, but you don't have to work there for anything. Its like a paradise but that's exactly the reason why many people and Pokémon are willing to work on their own to make it an even better place. What we get is respect. Nothing more or less and what else do we need if we already get all what we need to life for free.

“You don't have to work? But where comes the money from for all of this?"

“Everything will be explained to you at the induction if you decide to give it a chance." Cy answered again.

“Believe me, you won't regret it."

Now Cassandra stretched her back while a quiet yawn escaped her. Then cuddled herself to Cy who started to pet her affectionate.

Lucy still didn't want to trust him but at the same time she couldn't stop watching him cuddle with Cassandra. It wasn't too demonstrative so other people, normal people wouldn't think too much about it. But with her twisted mind she couldn't bear it another second without asking.

“Ok, I have to know it now. You and Cassio, are you-“

“Yes." Cassandra interrupted here.

“Yes, what?"

She did want to here it from them to be sure but instant of words, they just used their lips to answer. Cas didn't plan to Kiss Cy on the Lips. She just wanted to give him a long kiss on his cheek but right at this moment he turned his head and the kiss went more passionate then planned. Not that one of them had complains about it but still. After the Kiss endet both blushed a bit which just made there show a bit more authentic.

“Yes, to your question."

Then Cyres took his phone out and watched his display for a moment.

“Ah, Sorry but I just remembered something that can't wait. Please consider our offer."

Lucy didn't know what to say. Paralyzed from them, kissing each other she just watched them disappear.

“Do you think it worked?"

Meanwhile Cyres und Cassandra where on the way to their actual train to the Garden.

“Yea. I have a good feeling. She did believe us that we are together, and this will be the deciding factor."

“Oh, about that." Cyres Smiled. “Any plans for later? Otherwise I would love to continue what we started."

“I thought so.", she giggled. “Was that on purpose?"

“No, just a good accident. I mean she didn't dare to ask another question after it."

“I know. I didn't want to show that much cause of the other people in there. But at least only the waitress saw us."

“She did?"

“Don't worry. She looked… interested. Maybe we should observe her a bit.