The rain pours down. On his cold, hard grave. I'm so upset and scared, Yet I don't know who to blame. The box is lifted up, and placed into the hole. And it seems to tell the story, of his troubled life told. The dirt is shovelled back in, And not a thought is given, To exactly what they're doing, For they're just paid to fill 'em. I sit now in my room, remembering that day. when his life was ended plainly, out of sight, out of way. But I will not forget him. For I will see him soon. And I tighten up the rope and take a last look at the moon.
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The Rain Pours Down.
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A poem for when you're in a somber mood.
12 years ago
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It didn't come out as it appeared in publishing.:/
But still, I tried!
I'm thrilled you like my work! ^_^
I'm swamped down with study at the moment, so unfortunately they will be far apart.
By the way what does BTW mean?
~_~
ON ANY NOTE the like the poem, not one for dark poetry but none the less very good.
I wrote it on my phone, hence the big wall of text.
It just sorta came to me.
Glad you like it. :3