The Life of Another
Deleted Scene from Chapter 33
© Jake Atkinson
P.O.V. Roger - Steven's hospital room, talking with Natsume
“That was just something I picked up from a video I found on the internet." I said dismissively. “I've always wanted to learn more but I've never been able to afford formal training. And there's not really anyone to practice with at school."
The Natsume I remember could never pass up a hard-luck story. Come on, this is the perfect excuse for us to get a chance to be alone!
True to my expectations, Natsume didn't hesitate. “That is unfortunate. Would you mind showing me the move you were doing with Steven?"
Hmm, wasn't expecting this but ok... “I uh, asked Steven to grab the front of my shirt with both hands."
“Like this?" he said, grasping my shirt gently.
“Yeah," I said while slowly going through the maneuver. “Then I just pivoted at the waist and grabbed one of his hands like..."
“He's at it again!" Mr. Hampton called out in his caustic voice. “Better be careful Roger-boy. He's the type that might like that sort of thing!"
I had been so focused on Natsume that I hadn't noticed the return of the Hamptons and Ms. Thurlington until they were crowding the doorway. Startled, I quickly released his hand but before I could explain what was going on, Natsume intervened.
“Alvin, I trust your arm has mended well since we last spoke?"
Mr. Hampton's ears laid back. “Any time you want to finish that discussion, you know where to find me."
Natsume's tone stayed as calm as ever. “Roger was just showing me the move he was demonstrating for Steven the other night." He turned to face me. “An excellent example Roger. I am truly impressed. The way you finish up the lock is strikingly similar to the rather non-standard method I often prefer. And it is quite effective, as Alvin can personally atest." He grinned subtly and turned his attention back to Mr. Hampton.
I finally got a day off today and managed to get the first half of the chapter written and just figured I'd toss this out here since I know it's going to be awhile before I get the chapter done. In the process of rewriting the chapter I was able to squeeze in a peek about Eric's former talent so it's worked out well so far.
Thanks Rex. ^^
Made me chuckle, so thank you for that Jake!
One of my favorite quotes is..
Sarcasm.. The gentle art of stripping away an opponents Ego layer by layer until all that is left is the naked, shivering Id.
Thanks for the chuckles
Marc
I'm about 3,000 words into the next chapter and I'm rather excited to get it finished myself because then we finally get back around to Nick and Jim and all that fun! With Mother's Day next weekend I doubt I'll get much writing time in so I suspect it will be a few weeks before 33 finally gets posted.
Thanks for the encouragement! ^^
That said, it was still fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^
Oh and when they've gotten close in the past a lot more happened than blushing! XD