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If I had to guess, meddling burd is making a mess by meddling in the affairs of others.
Mike... for what it might be worth, YA by privetstvovat' Vas na moyem serdtse, moy drug.
The explanation of the bird's plot could have been done so much better and a lead up to this should have been a little less forced.
Doesn't seem like you are putting any honest to YOU work into this comic of yours and it is a damn shame because it started so damn good.
But then again, I ask that you give it another chance, other than a few minutes once a week, there's not much anything else to lose from reading this, right?
And if possible, I'd like to hear more about what you have to say about the whole plot, pacing and whatnots.
Let me hear your thoughts about it and see what I can try and do to make it better. :)
We as readers have no idea what this prick is thinking during the whole process of action. There was thoughtful structure for how the characters were coming up to their conclusions and this whole chapter is crap for character development.
I am not going to struggle as a reader to hope you do better. Hopefully your next project, if you ever have one, will have more time and effort put into it. Feels and looks like you gave up and I don't care to stick along for that.