There's a funny note around 1:06. I think you use a minor five in a cadence (i.e., didn't raise the leading tone). There's nothing "wrong" in composition, but if you're sticking to classical technique and progressive chord motion, that'd be something to avoid. Otherwise, I like what you did with this. I'd be interested to hear you do a textural experiment, kinda like an impressionist. Have you ever tried to paint a picture or tell a story with the texture of the music and not just the harmony? It can really make a difference in how you write stuff.

Very good, very classical man, I like it...even though I suck at reading music. O3O