Predator becomes prey comic
This is the story from one of my descriptions on my latest pieces of art work. I doesn't show everything from the story ok.
This Teenage Allosaurus Wonders the desert looking for food. The ground is dry and he is far away from water and dinosaur civilization. The Sun beats down onto the rough sand whilst the wind blows it into the Allosaurus face. exhausted and tired the dinosaur lies down to rest. What he doesn't notice is that he is not alone. 5 hours later, the restful Allosaurus gets up and looks around. The waves of heat blurred his vision but he was able to see something in the distance, he wondered over to the mysterious object in the sand. It appeared to be leaves of some kind, hes tummy growled at him telling him to eat it. To an Allosaurus, vegetables were not on there everyday diet but to a hungry meat eater he had no choice. He took a bit out of the leaf and swallowed it. Disgusting flavor, It wasn't nice at all. Then the ground started to shake, the Allosaurus freaked out as the sand started to rise into the air, a bulge appeared from in the sand. The sandy bulge then shot out a vine of some kind, like a wipe it wrapped round his mouth. The Allosaurus was being dragged in but by what, then another vine shot out and grabbed his leg. one tug and the dinosaur flipped over. the sandy bulge shook of the sand to reveal a plant mouth with teeth the size of a great white sharks. Unfortunately for this predator it was about to become prey.
ChuckyBB ©
This Teenage Allosaurus Wonders the desert looking for food. The ground is dry and he is far away from water and dinosaur civilization. The Sun beats down onto the rough sand whilst the wind blows it into the Allosaurus face. exhausted and tired the dinosaur lies down to rest. What he doesn't notice is that he is not alone. 5 hours later, the restful Allosaurus gets up and looks around. The waves of heat blurred his vision but he was able to see something in the distance, he wondered over to the mysterious object in the sand. It appeared to be leaves of some kind, hes tummy growled at him telling him to eat it. To an Allosaurus, vegetables were not on there everyday diet but to a hungry meat eater he had no choice. He took a bit out of the leaf and swallowed it. Disgusting flavor, It wasn't nice at all. Then the ground started to shake, the Allosaurus freaked out as the sand started to rise into the air, a bulge appeared from in the sand. The sandy bulge then shot out a vine of some kind, like a wipe it wrapped round his mouth. The Allosaurus was being dragged in but by what, then another vine shot out and grabbed his leg. one tug and the dinosaur flipped over. the sandy bulge shook of the sand to reveal a plant mouth with teeth the size of a great white sharks. Unfortunately for this predator it was about to become prey.
ChuckyBB ©
13 years ago
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Not bad, but the text doesn't quite match the action. He seems a little too surprised by the plants existence considering he's supposed to've just taken a bite out of it.