Nightly Escapade by Vye Riosaki

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Nightly Escapade

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Inspired by yet another tweet. My heart is a flutter with happiness for once.

9 years ago

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Nice poem. Concise and with a lot of feeling and lovely imagery. I like the repetition device you used on the second and third verses, it adds a little musicality to the writing.
I've always thought poetry was a handful to write, hehe. Not only you have to restrict yourself a only a few words per line, but you have to pay attention to the harmony of the composition. Congratulations on managing to write this ^^.

Thanks! If anything, this poem and the one before this one are by far the ones I'm the most proud of. X3

I can relate. I have a couple of tens of other poems that are in the trash at the moment. :/ So, yes. Poems are hard.

I'm happy to have made this as well - judging by the faves and votes, it looks like it resonated with other people! For that, I'm happy. :3

Thanks for the trails of comments!

I think creative writing in itself is difficult. I've tried my hand at writing short fiction and, most of the time, my stories end up in the rubbish bin :/ Finding the words that convey the ideas you have in your head is quite challenging, and making those words sound good is even more challenging still. Of course, poetry has its own additional difficulties, like rhyme and metric. It takes a lot of dedication to write poems :3

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Vye Riosaki

@VyeRiosaki

Vye Riosaki

@VyeRiosaki