a cutely humorous story, good work ;D

4/5

Just these two? I had hoped to find much more from you, ...
You write as city-smart, and young, but your word choices and skill in story telling indicate an older fur.
Your literary tastes indicate some one with "real" armor, not the cardboard 'looks-like' stuff.

If you wrote another I'd read it.
I recommend that you not read mine.