That's a great core for a song! I am a song writer but I write in other genres, and have never written a metal song, but I thoroughly enjoy listening to this kind of metal.

Now you just need lyrics, a singer, a drummer and a bass player. I'd love playing the bass to something like this.

You've got great potential! Don't stop playing!

*murrs* That sounds awesome

You coax some awesome sounds from those strings!