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Event Horizon By Jayden Day
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One of my favorites that I've made. Enjoy! <3
2 years ago
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Since there is no time line to go by to point out where my comment is about I tried to use beat measure count. 4 beats per measure normally. The beginning. That delayed bass beat just after the 4th measure tripped me up. It's good and works.
What doesn't work for me? How can I describe it.. The spooky music added in at around 8 measures in. The second guitar bit in the middle of the song does not harmonize at all with the existing guitar melody. Last 3rd sounds nice.
Now in return. I ask you to check out the 1 and only song I've ever created and I want your opinion. Feel free to point out all the bad stuff.