Downhill Roll Chapter 1: Questions... Lies... Tears
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I like the story, Really I think it's great. Just a few grammatical problems, such as "Uviq, their father was not the best father in the world, especially to Kavik, who almost hates him" Where you switch between tenses, but otherwise, great job.