Oh dear lord this is an instant freaking favorite. Everything is just perfect. The beat is a really unique one I have NEVER heard in any Drum and Bass track, the atmosphere is just perfect, and just... JEEZ. It's perfect, that's all I can really say. I haven't heard the original track, but I don't think it will beat this remix, considering it's a mere trance track according to Wikipedia. Well done.

I have listened to the original piece by ian van dahl, and sure this is definitely more fast-paced and upbeat, the vocal is also being borderline drown-out. Don't get me wrong, I love what u did to the song. i'll still give a 5/5 and a fave.
My advice is just to watch the sound and vocals and find a way to put them together in such a way that u have ur listeners goin into eargasms.