So close... yet so far THE BOOK
"Karmakat is a black lion, in the belief of his people black lion should be killed at birth because they got a demon in their soul. if it wasn't for a monk passing by to save him and put a seal on his body it would have happened.
that monk trained him all his childhood, even if people hated Karmakat.
one day the master died and he had to go on the road to follow his destiny, always rejected until he saved a wolf Lukwos, and decided to stay with him... "at least for a few."
little did he knew that this would be a life changing decision for him, in so many ways."
YEP this is the cover of my VERY FIRST BOOK, it's actually a temporary cover made by strype
i posted the first chapters in the past months and as promised i been working on the WHOLE FIRST CHAPTER, after debating and working on it here they are so far on E-BOOK
yep you can find them in very different formats on
https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/karmakat
or in the good old KINDLE on AMAZON hehe
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B008S1FF8U
and NOOK
http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/so-close-yet-so-far-karmakat-silverwind/1112420872?ean=2940044757431
yep this is a temporary cover because the great fliegen80s fliegen80s is working normally on a new cover and some inside drawings for when , around september, i work on doing a PAPERBACK version hehe
so yep
just when i look on my tablet and see this very first book all done and finished i feel like i have to pinch myself or if that is a dream.
i really did my best to keep the price reasonable and i hope you guys will be happy with it.
thanks a lot for the support everyone
cover by strype
BOOK AND CHARACTERS karmakat
that monk trained him all his childhood, even if people hated Karmakat.
one day the master died and he had to go on the road to follow his destiny, always rejected until he saved a wolf Lukwos, and decided to stay with him... "at least for a few."
little did he knew that this would be a life changing decision for him, in so many ways."
YEP this is the cover of my VERY FIRST BOOK, it's actually a temporary cover made by strype
i posted the first chapters in the past months and as promised i been working on the WHOLE FIRST CHAPTER, after debating and working on it here they are so far on E-BOOK
yep you can find them in very different formats on
https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/karmakat
or in the good old KINDLE on AMAZON hehe
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B008S1FF8U
and NOOK
http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/so-close-yet-so-far-karmakat-silverwind/1112420872?ean=2940044757431
yep this is a temporary cover because the great fliegen80s fliegen80s is working normally on a new cover and some inside drawings for when , around september, i work on doing a PAPERBACK version hehe
so yep
just when i look on my tablet and see this very first book all done and finished i feel like i have to pinch myself or if that is a dream.
i really did my best to keep the price reasonable and i hope you guys will be happy with it.
thanks a lot for the support everyone
cover by strype
BOOK AND CHARACTERS karmakat
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and well last i did the classic advertising through flash banners (which gave me a headache to understand how to create one since it was my first lol)
like your arts
i do draw too but this art isn't mine
i hope you might like the book too )
althought i will be selling the phyical book on amazon too around september when i have more time to work in it )
For example:
"But some are indeed different, for being hybrid between races or by their colors. A common belief in this world is that colors like black or grey in the races that aren’t supposed to be. This lion was one of them."
This paragraph is a perfect example of what I am talking about. The first sentence is improper, inasmuch as it starts with "But" (never do that!), and the general wording of it lends it an awkward feel. Try something more along the lines of "However, some of these beings are indeed different; some are hybrids born of two races, and some are of undesirable colour." (Not perfect I know, just a suggestion...)
The second sentence is a fragment; it trails off at the end without finishing the thought it started.
I'm not trying to be an asshole, so please don't take this the wrong way. I think that you have an interesting concept going here, but it needs a bit of an overhaul, editing-wise.
Good luck on your future endeavours!
but well just so you know the book has been fully edited now, i am just waiting on some illustrations because normally very soon i will publish the book in paper version to bring it to conventions
but in any case thanks for the kind words and comment )
the book been fully edited of gramatical mistakes, now i need the said illustrations and i launch the process of updating the e-book and starting the paper version
at the same time i am working on a "side dimension" comic that i will try to sell in paper too
if you just did too you had the newest edited version with the drawings in it too so i hope you will enjoy it
please leave me a review when you done so people see it's really changed hehe
the book version should be out in a day or two normally
other that than i am working on the second book and a regroup of small stories
A plotline like that isn't easy to come across.
good luck, and where will it be available?
you can either order a paper version for me and i signed it with no extra charge
or order it from http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/kazenoskara
or get the e-book version on amazon or smashwords hehe
Might be a big one. :)
Is there any where I can read this for free?
i have to do a living too at least a little bit... sorry
Ill probably buy it anyways. :P
Its okay.
might be odd to say lol.
How much movement have you had with this work, if I might ask? Copies sold in traditional print and e-format?
Thanks!