aww thank you ^^

thinking about that the whole time. at the moment I just have millions of image ideas but it doesn't make a storyline by now xD

I guess I have some friends that would like to make up a story for me ;-)

Thanks, I know the lightning isn't very realistic and stuff, already talked with many artists about that and I think I got it now and try my best with every new painting ^.^

Actually it's not the light that misses something.

For a comic, unrealistic is part of the attraction, right? If it was realistic I wouldn't look at it.
No, my nitpick is that where she's looking she has no devout. If she's looking at the light then her head is turned away. In other words, between the right mountain and her, there's a composition gap, and she's addressing that space. So you're just missing some hints of landscape there.

Note: on the left you have some subtle smoke-like disturbances of the light between the arm and the veil. Cultivate that! However you made that effect, voluntary or not, you can use it to make smoked environments with light rays that will pop in dimensions. It's very effective.