Ello, Pup! I see you've got talent in the artistic filed of drawing alongside your writing. Not a bad drawing at all, though, who am I to critique drawings, I can't draw to save my life as of now. I'm practicing, ok! It seems you hit everything I can't, hands/paws and muzzles. I have the body, legs, feet down, just paws and faces... They hate me. ;-;

Anywho, very pretty, very emotional. His body says to me, it's time to go and take said revenge, but his eyes long for something, sadness overtakes his face. I guess that's kinda what you were shooting for so good job there. :3 Semi-detailed, good inking, now, the only question is, are you going to color it? :o