That's a really interesting piece. I love the little story to go with it, the imagery, it makes you associate the music with the chase and conjures up pictures as it progresses.

If I have a criticism, then it's that at times there's a little bit of muted playing or fuzziness in the tone from a note not being held as long as it should be. But other than that I really enjoyed it. Very different. Good job!

Interesting. I don't know why, but this song sounds like it would make a good Silent Hill song.

Its a good work! I like.

a few flubbed notes (dads a guitarist, I play guitar hero, so yeah, i nitpick on occasion) after that, the imagery is good, as always love yer tunes