Time for a little trip ... with a better armored spine :-)

aaaaaaahhhhh why ed with that cliff hanger maaaaaan it was just getting good

I love how yo do the tech in your art/comic's it rocks!

could you go on with this? and how to get all the pages?

Such is life but I just wanted to point out that you have potential for a really, really good story

By going through your gallery on the furaffinity site I've been able to track down some more of your story, at least to do with Coffee and Arcus; and I love them more than ever. The drawings being take care, maintanence room, love live(both characters) and come quietly (Arcus at his day job). A query? does Finally together mean the white bear character at the start of Hidden Past eventually gets back his lover (by then also a cyborg bear?) I am going by the metal jaw.

Some other points; page numbers should be fixed; the story line actually goes 2 3 4 5 1 6. In the comic as a whole the writing is good;and the story comes across very well. There are some minor errors though, which I can fix if you want. Did FrostTWolf help with the writing?

In Maintanance room, with Coffee fixing the broken bits of Arcus, you have some of their dialogue (talking to each other) and although it is bad english (you apologized for it) the sense comes across well enough; you can do this to english and get away with it. I like this approach to telling a story with pictures. Do more of it please, particularly if doing comics is too hard. If you want the english edited I'm volunteering.