Chapter 27: Good Riddance
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SONG ALONE :link1620829:
Icon by KDNightstar. Full image can be found here :link1620826:. An additional image of this chapter by the same artist can be found here :link1620832:
Voice of Frank by jomooval.
Voice of Fake Cadet by SquirrellyJay.
Voice of Samuelson by David31.
Voice of Willis by Scatterpaws.
Voice of Zim by PersephoneMurray.
Voice of Frankel by RadarCub.
Voice of Adjutant by Tavimunk
Backing track purchased on http://www.karaoke-version.com. Original song performed by Green Day.
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Dipper is brought back from the party room, and things do not go according to plan, for Samuelson.
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Originally, I was going to have Dipper deny that Samuelson was responsible for the hazing, take his own punishment, and thus win Samuelson's heart, would would then get Dipper into an organization normally reserved for upper classmen.
However, lying to a superior officer would not be looked kindly on, I was told, so, I had to change it, without making Dipper look like a snitch. I did this by making Samuelson under suspicion already, unbeknownst to him. It was only Dipper's weakness to alcohol that broke the plans. Otherwise, Dipper would have slept through reveille and been brought up for disciplinary action. And Samuelson would have succeeded.
I was also given a better reward for Dipper, which will be revealed in the next installment.
SONG ALONE :link1620829:
Icon by KDNightstar. Full image can be found here :link1620826:. An additional image of this chapter by the same artist can be found here :link1620832:
Voice of Frank by jomooval.
Voice of Fake Cadet by SquirrellyJay.
Voice of Samuelson by David31.
Voice of Willis by Scatterpaws.
Voice of Zim by PersephoneMurray.
Voice of Frankel by RadarCub.
Voice of Adjutant by Tavimunk
Backing track purchased on http://www.karaoke-version.com. Original song performed by Green Day.
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Dipper is brought back from the party room, and things do not go according to plan, for Samuelson.
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Originally, I was going to have Dipper deny that Samuelson was responsible for the hazing, take his own punishment, and thus win Samuelson's heart, would would then get Dipper into an organization normally reserved for upper classmen.
However, lying to a superior officer would not be looked kindly on, I was told, so, I had to change it, without making Dipper look like a snitch. I did this by making Samuelson under suspicion already, unbeknownst to him. It was only Dipper's weakness to alcohol that broke the plans. Otherwise, Dipper would have slept through reveille and been brought up for disciplinary action. And Samuelson would have succeeded.
I was also given a better reward for Dipper, which will be revealed in the next installment.
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