This cleaned up well. Sam-gwosdz had commented that she'd somehow seemed to have a package in the penciling so I think this did better. I'm going to experiment with this one as well, color her in a general flat to see if that makes the picture better. My shading hasn't done too well in the past and I want to see if my pictures look better just flat colored.
This is the other version of this picture (http://www.sofurry.com/view/498972); Sam had mentioned he thought she would look hotter with the Swamp Foxes' cap as well and so with a few strokes it was so!

(F5 to reload- had the older version uploaded)

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