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Hurting

 

I’ve hurt someone.

I was trusted with his heart.

 

And I betrayed that.

What I did I can not say,

But I who had sworn

Never anyone to hurt.

Weather intentional

Or not the deed is done.

 

To collect his thoughts,

Now he has gone.

For my love I’ll abstain

Till he says it is ok I forgive

Or the word I Dread

‘We’re Done’

 

Even now his absence leaves

Me empty inside.

 

I want him back though

If I hurt I don’t deserve him.

 

If I can hurt one I hold so dear

Nor do I deserve the blessings of

The Goddess and the

Station of Kestra’Chern.

 

The Goddess offers

No words of comfort,

To her I feel I’ve also betrayed.

 

If she were only to tell me

I’ll take back up

My station and duties.

But awareness I must practice,

To see what my action pain causes.

A Kestra’s job is to help others through

Their Pain, not cause more.

 
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Hurting

I’ve hurt someone.

I was trusted with his heart.

And I betrayed that.

What I did I can not say,

But I who had sworn

Never anyone to hurt.

Weather intentional

Or not the deed is done.

To collect his thoughts,

Now he has gone.

For my love I’ll abstain

Till he says it is ok I forgive

Or the word I Dread

‘We’re Done’

Even now his absence leaves

Me empty inside.

I want him back though

If I hurt I don’t deserve him.

If I can hurt one I hold so dear

Nor do I deserve the blessings of

The Goddess and the

Station of Kestra’Chern.

The Goddess offers

No words of comfort,

To her I feel I’ve also betrayed.

If she were only to tell me

I’ll take back up

My station and duties.

But awareness I must practice,

To see what my action pain causes.

A Kestra’s job is to help others through

Their Pain, not cause more.

 
 
 
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This is a poem I wrote to help a character express hir feelings after hurting hir mate.

I understand that it needs work. It was intended to convey how shi felt and hir state of mind.

Though personally I accept/ want others opinions.
Thank you

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