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TOTGM - The Guardinia League
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Music - Remix By
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_p_4SDE2PEQ
Art By
Goodra
https://www.deviantart.com/theangryaron/art/Goodra-427979171
Zoroark
https://www.deviantart.com/xxsteefylovexx/art/Zoroark-Master-of-Illusion-279225405
Tsareena
https://www.deviantart.com/takkunotori/art/Tsareena-715614144
Long in the future, Guardinia Valley will come to house its own Pokemon League,
one which will play by its own rules to forever keep trainers on their toes and push
them to the brink and beyond should they meet the Champion that is the one and
only Guardian Master of Ureaxion!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_p_4SDE2PEQ
Art By
Goodra
https://www.deviantart.com/theangryaron/art/Goodra-427979171
Zoroark
https://www.deviantart.com/xxsteefylovexx/art/Zoroark-Master-of-Illusion-279225405
Tsareena
https://www.deviantart.com/takkunotori/art/Tsareena-715614144
Long in the future, Guardinia Valley will come to house its own Pokemon League,
one which will play by its own rules to forever keep trainers on their toes and push
them to the brink and beyond should they meet the Champion that is the one and
only Guardian Master of Ureaxion!
7 years ago
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I have a question to ask regarding the world you have created: I have plans to write my own story, I do not know when, or about whom, but I would like to request permission to use the world you have made as a part of my story. Ureaxion Region seems a beautiful place, and the Guardinia Valley seems an amazing area. Challenging the Guardinia League though? Not for a long time, likely not until we get to see just what Chris can throw at people in it. But I do believe it would be interesting to take on the league of Ureaxion[I do hope I've spelled it correctly], so I am mildly curious as to the gyms that live there[we don't even know what the gyms we HAVE seen actually are tbh, 1st gym had a Pangoro, so you'd think it'd be fighting. Then second gym had an Infernape, so it would likely be Fire, but could ALSO be fighting. Then the Warden had an entire team(minus Ursaring)of fighting types, so is he the fighting leader?! It's rather confusing]. I have very little set up for the world, minus one of the members of the team, a truly unique Ralts, born cursed from the start with a body looking nothing like her kind, not even the ones who are shiny, and, unfortunately, with other problems as well, ones that Calypso would know well...
Currently my plan is to have Ilya, my main character, challenge the Guardinia league, not for it's rewards, but to prove in their eyes that they are worthy of living in the Valley itself alongside their companion[also I removed the hermaphroditic part from the Ralts, now Violet, didn't really feel right to do that]. And the way Ilya plans on doing it is alone, Violet only assisting if she truly feels the desire to do so, or if Ilya had been through a rough patch recently. From what I can remember of the pokemon world, humans can train their Aura and strengthen it, and I took that to another level with Ilya. They can manipulate the energies of their Aura to replicate each of the 18 types, something that earned them one of the greatest achievements in the Martial Arts community of their world, and allows Ilya to fight on equal footing with other Pokemon, something they actively seek to do. With the absence of any genitalia, Ilya's body could be focused and molded as they saw fit, and they chose to hone it in combat. They are very supple, stand at about 5'11", and have hair a soft silver. Like Chris, Ilya detests the use of pokeballs, and disagrees with the normal use of Mega Evolution, as they received their Keystone[and Violet recieved her mother's Gardevoirite]on their 10th birthday[they are kind of like twins, born on the same day, mere moments apart, and raised together as siblings. However, it is less of a sibling relationship, and more a bond of two souls], leading to Ilya and Violet's bond becoming all the more unbreakable.
1: her trainers Keystone, attached to a silver cord, he was buried with it, yet gave her permission to give it away should the time and person be right
2: her own Gardevoirite, attached to a Gardenia flower pin, given as blessing to her daughter so that she may know her mother was proud
3: and last but not least, she passed the knowledge of her trainers bank details to her daughter, to be used when her and her new sibling eventually left to wander the world, one he had built up so that, in his passing his pokemon might be best cared for, yet instead she decided to pass it along once more to her child
One of the other key things from your world is the chips you used to stop capture. Violet, the now Gardevoir, carries hers with pride as she walks alongside her sibling. Ilya has promised her that, no matter what, she never has to battle unless she chooses to, which is something that fills her with pride. Besides, having been bullied a lot, Ilya eventually went and got trained in self-defense, rising through the ranks until eventually going toe to toe with the dojo's own...
*a small copy of myself wanders off, muttering spoiler after spoiler before fading out of view*
Apologies, I get caught on tangents, which delve into spoilers, and eventually I would've written a whole arc just in this comment alone! And we can't spoil ALL the fun, now can we? Now, back on track. Ilya can stand their own in combat with the best of them is all I shall say, and even has a trick or 2 up their sleeve.
Now, the final[hopefully]thing I wish to ask is if I could get you to look over the story every so often and give suggestions. This will be the first time in literal years that I have written, and I already feel GREAT regret towards the quality of those works, as they were from a time I did not understand anything about what I was doing. If so, honestly the easiest way to get a hold of me would be through this website, as I do not have a normally stable internet connection for use of Discord, despite it being my normal go to for communication. Given time I should be able to return to the starbucks I normally visit daily and have much more reliable internet connection.