nice beat. I love it. ^.=.^ 5/5

Its nice, Quite nice. Only thing I heard that coulda had a wee bit more to it.. At 0:46 or so you hear an instrument that (its a syth i dunno the name probally a lead of some sort) But to the poit it plays 3 notes i will just say do mi re. or perhaps its just a higher do do mi do (it sorta hard), for that istrument it complements well yet for the score when it ends the phase i think that this instrument should of done the same and ended with a bit of a longer touch like do mi re do.
haveing only 3 notes (especialy on a 4/4 beat leaves tension [tension is a state in which music leads to another part, sorta like a cliff hanger, which more is expected to come.]) of course in the middle of the song it was great ! because it lead straight to its bridge and its 2nd part ^^ so kudoes to you ..

im actually hoping to get into doing this sorta thing hehe you inspired me tundra hehe

This is awesome. I think my favorite one I've heard of you so far.

have u ever thought of posting ur stuff to other sites cause i know one that u might like?

yay! just checked the site and i have u on my watch list and fave list. now i dont have to argue with this site to listen :)