I think its fine, but it takes to long time for the rythm to be established and the music begin.

I know this is a DEMO and you are stell woking on it, like Gabusmann seds the interw is to long. You need to add a melidy to the set of cords becus thay are the same set of cords over and over. It gets old vary quickly. The arrangement is quite good. I do hope to hear mor from you.

*blushes* seriously? I'd be honored ^,..,^

Take a look at my Melody of My Heart song--I think it's one of the best tracks I've put out so far