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Nicholas and Malika Four
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Now here we have a fight and I like how it came out.
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Strength and Beauty
Sword Fight
Malika and Nicholas entered the armory. It was brightly lit and a few well-built furnaces were here along with tools, the metal, and other materials to make weapons and armor, and stacks of the stuff was on the far end. The roof had cross beams as well that someone could walk on if they got there. But nobody was here. “Melari?” the fosky called out. There was no response.
“Great, nobody here,” the Anubian Jackal growled. “So you just dragged me in here for no reason?”
“Will you shut up?!” the male snapped. “He’s just gone out for a bit. In any case I had to pick something else up here.” Nicholas went over to a section of swords. “There it is.”
“Oh good for you,” Malika said sarcastically. “So what is it? Some dinky knife? That’d suit you!” She then spotted some other swords that were katanas and reached out to take a look but then felt the touch of a blade on her right paw that had done so. Startled, Malika looked up to see Nicholas himself with what he had grabbed which was a katana with a black hilt in his right paw. The fosky’s face was one of anger.
“Say that again,” he snarled, slowly advancing.
“What the hell are you doing?!” the female stated, backing up. “You have a death wish?!”
“Not at all,” Nicholas growled. “I’m going to make you take back what you’ve said and done so far.”
“You’re playing with fire since I can tell others what happened,” Malika growled back.
“True enough.” The male lowered his weapon. “Now be good and stay right here since I have power over you while I go and get Melari.” The fosky took one step to leave and heard the unsheathing of the Anubian Jackal’s sword. The male turned around and saw her holding the point to him. “You think it’s wise Anubian Jackal, crossing blades with the eldest son of the captain of the guard?”
“You need to be taken down a notch,” she snarled. The fosky raised his sword up and touched the metal of it to her weapon.
“Same to you.”
The fosky did a couple of swipes and Malika blocked them with ease. A pause happened for a second and Nicholas struck harder. He pushed the female back but then she was able to take a swing, making the guy step the other way. The Anubian Jackal held her sword out again with a smirk and the fosky raised his eyebrows in surprise. Then she went on the attack with her weapon. After some blows they came to a stop after Nicholas batted her sword out of the way. “You know what you’re doing, I’ll give you that,” he said. “Excellent form. But how’s your footwork?”
“First I step here.” The guy did and struck with Malika counterattacking and stepping perfectly. “Very good.” The female still had a frown on her face. “And now I step again.” The two moved and struck again. Once again, the Anubian Jackal got it. Nicholas did a step and strike to upset her, but the female saw through it and parried the blow. “Not bad.” Nicholas seethed his sword. “But I grow tired of this fight. Now if you’ll excuse me…”
He turned to the door to leave. Malika picked up one of the katanas she had tried to touch before, got one out and threw it in between the cracks of the door so it wouldn’t open. The blade just missed Nicholas’s head who stopped with wide eyes. Slowly, the guy reached out and brought the shaking sword to a stop. The fosky tried to pull it out but it wouldn’t budge. Malika smirked at this as the male tried a few more times but nothing happened. The guy turned to face her. “That is a wonderful trick,” Nicholas stated. “Except now, you’ve forced me to take you more seriously.” The guy grabbed another sword from a rack. “And now, you’re down one weapon while I have two.”
The Anubian Jackal quickly grabbed another with her left paw. The fosky looked to the right and tried to strike from there, but she was ready and two swords clashed together. Both of them went back and forth for a few blows before Nicholas knocked the sword out of Malika’s left paw. She ducked under the swing from his right arm and quickly grabbed another sword. The two came together again. “Who makes all of these?” she asked, wondering how there could be so many.
“Another of my friends!” Nicholas responded and they did another clash. “And I help him practice with them as much as possible!”
The guy then got the sword in his left paw knocked out, causing him to throw a couple of knives at the Anubian Jackal. She was able to block them. “I certainly would like to meet him!” the female replied and both were back at it before coming to a standstill. “If he’s anything like you, he could give me a test of skill. Or, maybe he’s just as rude as you. He’s not from your family, is he?”
“Well at least this rude guy’s going to kick your ass!” the male snarled. He then did a flurry of strikes and thrusts which caused Malika to back up onto a cart with one set of wheels. It came loose when he stepped up to follow her, causing both to regain their balance for a few seconds before striking at the other. The Anubian Jackal then moved her sword and managed to get it into the guard of the sword Nicholas had in his left paw. This was due to a couple of holes that were meant to be decorative. The female thrusted up, causing his arm to go up and the sword to be embedded into one of the beams. The fosky tried to reach up and grab it but couldn’t quiet reach before swinging with his right arm that still held the katana in that paw. This caused Malika to be distracted enough that she didn’t notice the male hit one of the boards on the cart with his foot, causing it to come up and hit her in the face. The female was knocked off the cart to the ground.
Nicholas smirked and then jumped up and tried to get the sword there that was stuck. He was pulling and the Anubian Jackal got back on the cart. Just in time the weapon in the beam came out and the fosky fell down. His body hit his end of the wagon and the other end went up, taking Malika up to the beams above. The male in the meantime got back on his feet since he had rolled off the cart. He got back on it, looking for the female. The male looked up and saw her, letting out another smirk. Malika used one of her swords to cut at some ropes that were holding up some materials that were heavy and placed right above the cart. They came down. “Oh shit,” the male said, knowing what was going to happen.
The materials landed on the cart and propelled him up to the beams. The guy got his balance and the two began to clash again. But this time Nicholas got disarmed again so he only had one sword while the female had two. The fosky swung from his beam to the floor and the Anubian Jackal was quick to follow. Nicholas landed next to a bag that was hanging and opened it, spilling the contents of it into Malika’s face. Her white fur became dirty again like before and she coughed from the dust. She managed to recover only to find Nicholas had his katana to her throat. “You fucking cheated!” she growled.
“Using the terrain to my advantage,” he replied. “All warriors do that.”
“Well now that was quiet a fight indeed,” went a different male voice. The other two turned to see a male wolverine who was powerfully built and older but who had kind eyes. Next to him was a female mouse with brown hair that was long but the top part was white. Her eyes were blue as well. Right by her was a male rate with light brown hair that was somewhat long, two earrings with one being on each ear, and brown fur. His eyes were a bit different as the pupils were red, but the white was black. Even with this, they bore kindness. Both of the new males for the stripes were colored orange, but the new female had blue stripes while the two rodents both had brown colored fur. “It looks like we may have found someone else who can hold their own against Nicholas besides me.”
“And you are?” the Anubian Jackal asked.
“Captain,” the fosky replied and went over to him. “I didn’t know you were here.”
“Well you were so absorbed, I thought it would best not to interrupt,” the wolverine replied. He then looked to Malika. “Oh sorry. We should introduce ourselves. I’m Rex. And this is Chery.”
The female mouse nodded before replying in a country accent, “Howdy.”
“And Remy McCoy.”
“A pleasure,” the rat said in a heavy Cajun accent but it was easy to understand him. Remy then turned to Nicholas. “So what brings you here with such a fierce sparring partner?” The reason was told. “He should be in soon. Why not wait here for him?”
“Sounds good,” the fosky replied. He wasn’t worried about this fight and felt he had proven himself against Malika. She in turn was looking at these new people and had the funniest feeling she would be seeing them a lot more. As for the fight, the female was still pissed at Nicholas, but figured there would be other chances. She had no idea how much there would be.
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Strength and Beauty
Sword Fight
Malika and Nicholas entered the armory. It was brightly lit and a few well-built furnaces were here along with tools, the metal, and other materials to make weapons and armor, and stacks of the stuff was on the far end. The roof had cross beams as well that someone could walk on if they got there. But nobody was here. “Melari?” the fosky called out. There was no response.
“Great, nobody here,” the Anubian Jackal growled. “So you just dragged me in here for no reason?”
“Will you shut up?!” the male snapped. “He’s just gone out for a bit. In any case I had to pick something else up here.” Nicholas went over to a section of swords. “There it is.”
“Oh good for you,” Malika said sarcastically. “So what is it? Some dinky knife? That’d suit you!” She then spotted some other swords that were katanas and reached out to take a look but then felt the touch of a blade on her right paw that had done so. Startled, Malika looked up to see Nicholas himself with what he had grabbed which was a katana with a black hilt in his right paw. The fosky’s face was one of anger.
“Say that again,” he snarled, slowly advancing.
“What the hell are you doing?!” the female stated, backing up. “You have a death wish?!”
“Not at all,” Nicholas growled. “I’m going to make you take back what you’ve said and done so far.”
“You’re playing with fire since I can tell others what happened,” Malika growled back.
“True enough.” The male lowered his weapon. “Now be good and stay right here since I have power over you while I go and get Melari.” The fosky took one step to leave and heard the unsheathing of the Anubian Jackal’s sword. The male turned around and saw her holding the point to him. “You think it’s wise Anubian Jackal, crossing blades with the eldest son of the captain of the guard?”
“You need to be taken down a notch,” she snarled. The fosky raised his sword up and touched the metal of it to her weapon.
“Same to you.”
The fosky did a couple of swipes and Malika blocked them with ease. A pause happened for a second and Nicholas struck harder. He pushed the female back but then she was able to take a swing, making the guy step the other way. The Anubian Jackal held her sword out again with a smirk and the fosky raised his eyebrows in surprise. Then she went on the attack with her weapon. After some blows they came to a stop after Nicholas batted her sword out of the way. “You know what you’re doing, I’ll give you that,” he said. “Excellent form. But how’s your footwork?”
“First I step here.” The guy did and struck with Malika counterattacking and stepping perfectly. “Very good.” The female still had a frown on her face. “And now I step again.” The two moved and struck again. Once again, the Anubian Jackal got it. Nicholas did a step and strike to upset her, but the female saw through it and parried the blow. “Not bad.” Nicholas seethed his sword. “But I grow tired of this fight. Now if you’ll excuse me…”
He turned to the door to leave. Malika picked up one of the katanas she had tried to touch before, got one out and threw it in between the cracks of the door so it wouldn’t open. The blade just missed Nicholas’s head who stopped with wide eyes. Slowly, the guy reached out and brought the shaking sword to a stop. The fosky tried to pull it out but it wouldn’t budge. Malika smirked at this as the male tried a few more times but nothing happened. The guy turned to face her. “That is a wonderful trick,” Nicholas stated. “Except now, you’ve forced me to take you more seriously.” The guy grabbed another sword from a rack. “And now, you’re down one weapon while I have two.”
The Anubian Jackal quickly grabbed another with her left paw. The fosky looked to the right and tried to strike from there, but she was ready and two swords clashed together. Both of them went back and forth for a few blows before Nicholas knocked the sword out of Malika’s left paw. She ducked under the swing from his right arm and quickly grabbed another sword. The two came together again. “Who makes all of these?” she asked, wondering how there could be so many.
“Another of my friends!” Nicholas responded and they did another clash. “And I help him practice with them as much as possible!”
The guy then got the sword in his left paw knocked out, causing him to throw a couple of knives at the Anubian Jackal. She was able to block them. “I certainly would like to meet him!” the female replied and both were back at it before coming to a standstill. “If he’s anything like you, he could give me a test of skill. Or, maybe he’s just as rude as you. He’s not from your family, is he?”
“Well at least this rude guy’s going to kick your ass!” the male snarled. He then did a flurry of strikes and thrusts which caused Malika to back up onto a cart with one set of wheels. It came loose when he stepped up to follow her, causing both to regain their balance for a few seconds before striking at the other. The Anubian Jackal then moved her sword and managed to get it into the guard of the sword Nicholas had in his left paw. This was due to a couple of holes that were meant to be decorative. The female thrusted up, causing his arm to go up and the sword to be embedded into one of the beams. The fosky tried to reach up and grab it but couldn’t quiet reach before swinging with his right arm that still held the katana in that paw. This caused Malika to be distracted enough that she didn’t notice the male hit one of the boards on the cart with his foot, causing it to come up and hit her in the face. The female was knocked off the cart to the ground.
Nicholas smirked and then jumped up and tried to get the sword there that was stuck. He was pulling and the Anubian Jackal got back on the cart. Just in time the weapon in the beam came out and the fosky fell down. His body hit his end of the wagon and the other end went up, taking Malika up to the beams above. The male in the meantime got back on his feet since he had rolled off the cart. He got back on it, looking for the female. The male looked up and saw her, letting out another smirk. Malika used one of her swords to cut at some ropes that were holding up some materials that were heavy and placed right above the cart. They came down. “Oh shit,” the male said, knowing what was going to happen.
The materials landed on the cart and propelled him up to the beams. The guy got his balance and the two began to clash again. But this time Nicholas got disarmed again so he only had one sword while the female had two. The fosky swung from his beam to the floor and the Anubian Jackal was quick to follow. Nicholas landed next to a bag that was hanging and opened it, spilling the contents of it into Malika’s face. Her white fur became dirty again like before and she coughed from the dust. She managed to recover only to find Nicholas had his katana to her throat. “You fucking cheated!” she growled.
“Using the terrain to my advantage,” he replied. “All warriors do that.”
“Well now that was quiet a fight indeed,” went a different male voice. The other two turned to see a male wolverine who was powerfully built and older but who had kind eyes. Next to him was a female mouse with brown hair that was long but the top part was white. Her eyes were blue as well. Right by her was a male rate with light brown hair that was somewhat long, two earrings with one being on each ear, and brown fur. His eyes were a bit different as the pupils were red, but the white was black. Even with this, they bore kindness. Both of the new males for the stripes were colored orange, but the new female had blue stripes while the two rodents both had brown colored fur. “It looks like we may have found someone else who can hold their own against Nicholas besides me.”
“And you are?” the Anubian Jackal asked.
“Captain,” the fosky replied and went over to him. “I didn’t know you were here.”
“Well you were so absorbed, I thought it would best not to interrupt,” the wolverine replied. He then looked to Malika. “Oh sorry. We should introduce ourselves. I’m Rex. And this is Chery.”
The female mouse nodded before replying in a country accent, “Howdy.”
“And Remy McCoy.”
“A pleasure,” the rat said in a heavy Cajun accent but it was easy to understand him. Remy then turned to Nicholas. “So what brings you here with such a fierce sparring partner?” The reason was told. “He should be in soon. Why not wait here for him?”
“Sounds good,” the fosky replied. He wasn’t worried about this fight and felt he had proven himself against Malika. She in turn was looking at these new people and had the funniest feeling she would be seeing them a lot more. As for the fight, the female was still pissed at Nicholas, but figured there would be other chances. She had no idea how much there would be.
X
So you will see later where this goes. But there is one more pic that goes with this.
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