LJIdol Feedback Post
Morning kids!
So, this week we have to re-write the one of the three entries from earlier: the entry that was ranked lowest by the other contestants. In my case it is Turtles.
I'm putting this post here so that I can get feedback from you guys on it.
I won't say too much, because I don't want to influence you, but I will say that of the three this was my favourite concept, but the one I executed the least well. So perhaps the result is unsurprising. What I need now from you guys is to know what you think worked about the entry, and more importantly, what really didn't.
My thick skin is on, and I appreciate total honesty. Don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything: I can take feedback on my writing just fine :)
So take off your gloves and go for it!
:)
So, this week we have to re-write the one of the three entries from earlier: the entry that was ranked lowest by the other contestants. In my case it is Turtles.
I'm putting this post here so that I can get feedback from you guys on it.
I won't say too much, because I don't want to influence you, but I will say that of the three this was my favourite concept, but the one I executed the least well. So perhaps the result is unsurprising. What I need now from you guys is to know what you think worked about the entry, and more importantly, what really didn't.
My thick skin is on, and I appreciate total honesty. Don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything: I can take feedback on my writing just fine :)
So take off your gloves and go for it!
:)