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Levi Polzin's avatar

“I retch like prayer churning dirt

into soil, spinning up fungus for

advancement—“

Stunning line there.

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thank you Levi <3

code name ACE's avatar

I feel like a hopeless romantic shark just wrote this from the perspective of a butterfly that misses being a caterpillar. Great job!

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Thank you for the support ACE!! Happy Friday

crookedmoon_wonderland's avatar

Beautiful. Honestly left speechless after reading this

Ootheca's avatar

Thank you so much :)) this one was fun for me to write

Rick_KC's avatar

I like the end of this, the comparison is a surprise and smart.

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Cheers thank you Rick. I love Wes Anderson movies to the point of always picking partners who want me to be like Jason Schwartzman xD