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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Loved this one, especially the call to action of awakening. Was that a Platonic (or is it Aristotlean? I had little patience for philospophy, sadly) idea toward the end?

Trevor Cohen's avatar

I liked your choice of starless night next to black. It stopped me for a moment, trying to imagine a black cloudless night without stars - actually quite hard for me to do. Which made me think if there’s anywhere in our universe where you can see a clear perfectly dark starless night. And I thought of my eyes opening from a dreamless night.

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