I recently saw a question that I think gets it mostly right:
That is, copy Wireshark's dissection into the question, with code formatting, redacting sensitive parts.
In that case, you could probably remove the part until Secure Sockets Layer, since the Ethernet / IP / TCP parts are most likely not relevant to the problem, and thus just make the question harder to read. You never know when they might be relevant, though...
(And don't post screenshots. They are hard to read, and not searchable.)
