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Sandra Greer's avatar

Dynamite! Can't wait until the next one comes out!

Maggie Bennett's avatar

Oh goody goody goody!! Gonna go read it now!!! ♥️

Maggie Bennett's avatar

(I’m not a slow reader! I had to read Chapter 24 again because I’m old and forgetful, and then have a meltdown because my life’s fucked up, then recover and THEN read it.). Keira, your writing is as easy to read as Stephen King’s. His characters and the relatability of his stories and the easy reading - not jerky like some people write - are what does it for me. You write like that! Not like him, but in your own way, but just very readable - and engaging! Man, I hope that beast doesn’t poison Sam from the inside! 😳

Keira of the Stars's avatar

I am glad you like it. This chapter took longer to get out than I was expecting. It is hard to keep the pacing and not make it overly long.

Maggie Bennett's avatar

Omg I shouldn’t have said anything about the story line. I wasn’t thinking -haven’t been thinking straight lately. Geez, I’m sorry! 😞

Keira of the Stars's avatar

Nothing to apologize for, it happens.

Maggie Bennett's avatar

♥️👍♥️👍♥️👍

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Nice cliffhanger/cool story/well done