Lacking variety on the women in this tbh. While sure: The art style has the characters look very similar. But... that kinda makes it worse when they are kinda copy pasted. Very "same face anime" syndrome. Like, you got a ton of variety you can add with pubes, pussies, breasts, etc. And... instead every effort is put into Finn?
Some spelling errors. But nothing too bad. Like, it has a VERY solid foundation. But, it feels like it could have a bit more than a Gary Stu story. It really limits what you can do with the characters.


