Betaaaaaaa?

Anyone? I have a fic, B5, Ivanova/Garibaldi, 3000 words, not part of my big AU. I need someone to tell me whether it's crossed the line from cute/funny/fluffy to just ridiculous. (It would not be the first time.) I need another day or so with it for editorial purposes, so you'd get it tomorrow evening, most likely.

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