Meh.
*rereads the 2.5 pages of her story*
This is reading way more like a movie/TV script than a story. On the one hand, this bodes well for screenwriting next year. On the other hand, this is due in a week and a half.
Sigh.
I've discovered lately that rather a lot of my writing would be better done in script form. Comes from seeing everything as a movie in my head, I suppose. Really, I see everything I ever write about as if it were on a giant TV screen in my mind. I know exactly what the characters look like down to individual freckles on their skin.
Unfortunately, so not helping me now...
This is reading way more like a movie/TV script than a story. On the one hand, this bodes well for screenwriting next year. On the other hand, this is due in a week and a half.
Sigh.
I've discovered lately that rather a lot of my writing would be better done in script form. Comes from seeing everything as a movie in my head, I suppose. Really, I see everything I ever write about as if it were on a giant TV screen in my mind. I know exactly what the characters look like down to individual freckles on their skin.
Unfortunately, so not helping me now...