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docs: Add sequence diagram for xDS error_detail NACK example#15795

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@eric846 eric846 commented Mar 31, 2021

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Commit Message: docs: Add sequence diagram for xDS error_detail NACK example
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S->C: {resources={A}, version=1, nonce=1}
C->S: {resource_names={A}, version=1, nonce=1 (this is an ACK)}
C->S: {resource_names={A, B}, version=1, nonce=1}
Note over C: adding subscription\nto B
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I think in all the "Note over"s that they are below the line they are referring to. E.g. here, the addition of subscription to B by the client happens in the line above when {A, B} is sent.

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Rearranged these to be clearer now.

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Thanks @eric846, this should help clarify, just one nit.
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LGTM, thanks!

@htuch htuch merged commit 4035f2a into envoyproxy:main Apr 2, 2021
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