M.Phil. draft

So I've got a very final draft now of my M.Phil., and I'm wondering if any of you guys would like to read it? It's 40,000 words (as many as I'm allowed), which is quite a lot, and I'll need it back by, say, the 20th of August (which'll give me a week to incorporate whatever you suggest), so you'll have less than three weeks; and, most importantly, it's not terribly good, and fails to be so because of the fairly deep reason that I'm just not that hot a philosopher, which means you might have a hard time making suggestions that will really help it. The other thing is that it's a bit technical in points, and quite deeply steeped in certain boring philosophers' debates, and perhaps not for non-philosophers. (Although some of it is.)

If you do want to look at it, then you might want to know: I'll send it to you in .docx format, double-spaced, unless you prefer otherwise (e.g., .pdf single-spaced). Ch. 2 (13,000 words), the most technical chapter, has been looked over by a handful of professional philosophers and can be skipped. I'll briefly credit you in the preface, which is no reward worth talking about, but more importantly, I'll return the favour if you want another pair of eyes looking over your, e.g., Ph.D., novel, symphony.

So if you're interested, e-mail me at jamescamien at gmail. Or leave a comment with your e-mail address. Or whatever.