Hey there! This is my first post, so please give me feedback~

 Hello there! I'm an apprentice mangaka, and I'm writing a fan-yuri right now! I would love feedback for people who actually know what they're talking about~ XD I also think anyone on here would appreciate this more because they know the series~ so, if you could please, read and rate my Fire Emblem shoujo-ai/yuri! X3 thanks~

Title: Milady
Game: Rekka
Pairing: Lyn x Florina
Rating: probably around PG 13~
Warnings: while it's not rated too high now, it will be in the future!

Link: http://melidichan.deviantart.com/gallery/28497362

This will take you to the deviantart page~ I don't know how to post it on here >.<
Please comment! I would really love feedback! Thanks!!