The prompt was supposed to be conveyed in the man's observance, and his wanting to change his niece's life. How he had made a pact with his brother but my fingers and hands were getting too wonky.…
I'm not really seeing the prompt here, but I do like the story! And I agree with the visitor-- loved by one but hated by everyone else is a terrible way for a child to grow up, and as old as she…
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