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Daisy J Fable's avatar

I love catching the light ! (or does it catch me?) hmmm...

Raya's avatar

This is so lovely!! Thank you for sharing<33

Scogli di Fiume's avatar

I like how you make your emotions travel trough your words❤️

Phil Pinelli's avatar

enjoyable! let them twirl around your chest for a while

kenz.'s avatar

thank you for reading :)

Marisa Maria's avatar

this piece is so enchanting. It makes me want to pause, notice the sunlight on my own skin, and twirl with it a little. 🌞✨

kenz.'s avatar

ugh, what an angel. thank you for reading my thoughts

VedJournal ✍️📜's avatar

That's really wonderful Poem

I can say

I don't highlight everything but here it is

Thanks for sharing and keep writing 💫

JUST highlighting this part

in the corner of my living room

in a shadow stretching across the floor

in a breeze that slips under the door

tiny magic tucked in ordinary things

and i laugh at myself

kenz.'s avatar

thank you for reading and the feedback :)

Lyric ♡⸜(。˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡'s avatar

I loveee this!! it felt so warm and inviting

kenz.'s avatar

thank you for reading :)

Claudia's avatar

Love this softness detail description...if it matters you stay still longer creating inner peace creating blissful hours ahead

kenz.'s avatar

thank you for taking the time to read :) I appreciate the feedback!

Paper Lifeboat's avatar

this feels like noticing made into an art form. so much warmth, motion, and quiet wonder as if memory itself is still dancing. i'm a newbie here and i would love to connect. i write personal essays that stem from the restlessness of the female mind to try make sense of everything. lets support and grow together, if interested here's my latest piece :

https://open.substack.com/pub/kalpanaa/p/the-quiet-afterlife-of-trauma?r=6j2zsm&utm_medium=ios

let me know what you think about it