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Ben Folk's avatar

Here is one I wrote recently. If this resonates with anyone, feel free to follow or subscribe and I will follow and subscribe right back.

https://substack.com/@benfolk/note/c-186884699

Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

Love, Desire, the Years, and the Sky

The love is still here

In a note folded

With poems in a book

As near as that

Yet I seldom read it

Anymore

Desire was strong

While you were here

The note still wafts a scent

Yet it rarely reaches me

I seldom need to catch it

Anymore

The years find me yet

Drawn further away

From the spinning poles

Of my old world.

My life has fewer reasons

Anymore

Without the magnetic compass

Alive in the sky

The wild geese

Can't fly

Anymore

augmented man's avatar

This landed softly and then stayed.

The way you let “anymore” do the heavy work is devastating, it turns from a word into a weather system. That folded note, the scent that “rarely reaches” the old world’s spinning poles… and then the geese. That final image feels like grief made visible.

Thank you for sharing this.

augmented man's avatar

Thank you for this. It feels handwritten in the best way

Rolando Andrade's avatar

Thank you. Yes, it was handwritten and delivered with a kiss

The Outsider’s Notebook's avatar

Not sure of I did or didn't 🤣

augmented man's avatar

You did, and it stays

augmented man's avatar

It’s sharp and tender at once

Thank you for sharing

The Outsider’s Notebook's avatar

Not at all, thanks for taking the time to read it :)

A.J.D. Davis's avatar

https://open.substack.com/pub/thepoetslantern/p/before-x-ajd-davis?r=5i7js7&utm_medium=ios

My name is A.J.D. Davis, this is my first published poem. My publication will hold many heartfelt poems from myself & others.

augmented man's avatar

A.J.D thanks a bunch for sharing this

Athanasios Sklavis's avatar

https://athanasiossklavis.substack.com/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=59l45zMyMy

Here's a poem I wrote today,

My Study Facing West

My study facing West

Looks out into the wood

On mountains capped with snow

From a blue house in the pines

Nestled down below

My study facing west

Is filled with wondrous things

With oddities and books

With instruments of song

With elusive melodies

My study facing West

Where my black dog Bear

Curls on his Persian rug

Soaking up the rays

Of a winter’s afternoon

My study facing west

A place of sweet repose

To rest my weary bones

I hide myself away

From the tumult of the world

My study facing west

Is painted with the light

Of a golden somber dusk

Where sun dappled trees

Sway gently with the wind

g.a.jennings's avatar

a call to share

came in the gloom

with words to spare

i offer them so soon

as a comemt poem

silly as i make it

silly as we need it

in these days of doom

augmented man's avatar

Every line here feels startlingly alive

Sharmila Ganapathy's avatar

This is a poem which is half about my late maternal grandmother: https://poeticjourneyswithsharmila.substack.com/p/i-come-from-ode-to-the-asian-matriarch

augmented man's avatar

Sharmila, thank you for sharing this piece of her with us,

Brady Martinez's avatar

https://substack.com/@poetoccasionally/note/p-177956657?r=4glrpu&utm_source=notes-share-action&utm_medium=web

This is a poem I wrote during two stages of a breakup: when it happened and a year later. Would love some feedback. I hope you like it!

augmented man's avatar

This is quiet, strong work. Keep the lens on the bird and the ground beneath it, and the truth will rise on its own.

Your comment here is very much appreciated

Nimita Kaul's avatar

https://open.substack.com/pub/darakhth/p/is-my-voice-truly-my-own?r=d9o4y&utm_medium=ios

Hi, this one is my latest poem with my art.

Happy to connect,!

augmented man's avatar

Your poem tenderly captures the tug-of-war with inner voices, raw, honest, and quietly empowering,

I'm so happy to connect with you!

Nimita Kaul's avatar

Thank you! So glad you liked it ☺️

Francesca Bossert's avatar

Mad World

Juxtapositions of Privilege and War

Armed with a glass of Chardonnay,

I sit amid golden light

while swallows pond-swoop

for Michelin-star mosquitoes,

hoping the feral kitten’s mother

has returned from her evening hunt,

that nothing has befallen her.

Will we later watch

Drive

to Survive?

Armed with automatic weapons,

soldiers in vantage points

watch the frantic agony of the starving

and shoot,

just because they can.

I drain my glass.

Check the WiFi.

As if connection could save us.

© Francesca Bossert 2025

augmented man's avatar

this glows & stings at once. in just a breath, you turn cozy wine into a mirror of war, leaving me moved, grateful, and wide awake

Francesca Bossert's avatar

thank you for reading, Aug. We are so lucky, it’s almost obscene. Sharing my words is cleansing.

A New Poem A Day's avatar

Here's a recent one from me. https://substack.com/home/post/p-166435368

augmented man's avatar

The "Burn After Reading" Technique, i love it

joestronge's avatar

I have some poetry on Power Poetry under joestronge. The site is admittedly limited as to mise en page but is so easy otherwise.

augmented man's avatar

Joe, every layout is unique, but the most effective ones always hit the mark