OOC: Concrit and Comments Post

Hey guys!  As many of you know, this is my first time RPing, so any suggestions or ego-boosting are welcome!  Riza Hawkeye is one of my favorite characters, so I want to do her justice.

Unless I fail at the internets, anonymous posting is enabled (click the option manually), all posts will be screened, and IP logging is off.  If you want to make sure, I'll take a guinea pig, though.  XD 

ETA:  Thanks for volunteering!