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Josie Thames's avatar

This put an ache in me, and I loved every line, but especially:

"I create because something in me

refuses to pass through this life

without leaving a mark on yours."

I don't believe there's a creator out there who wouldn't identify with those lines.

Allison Ink's avatar

I love hearing that, Josie. Thank you. 🖤

Felipe C. Barreda's avatar

Well done.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you! :) I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

Linda Blatnik's avatar

I feel your pulse.

mine is catharsis. I have to write it, even if no one sees it. nice. thanks.

Allison Ink's avatar

it’s just for you… and sometimes that’s all it needs to be. :) thanks for reading

From Tender Ground's avatar

This walked straight into my heart .. beautiful 🧡

Allison Ink's avatar

oh, why thank you!! that’s a lovely compliment 🤍

Rajnikant Sanghavi's avatar

Oh, we would love more of the same.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you for reading! :)

Data Frank's avatar

I love how you capture the urgency of creating and the way both joy and pain demand to be expressed. Your words reminded me that creation connects us and leaves a mark on others, even in small ways.

I would love to hear what moments in your own life you felt compelled to capture.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thanks so much for reading. Pondering your note - I think moments of joy inspire me to write and moments of pain inspire me to paint. I had never thought of that before, so I really appreciate your comments encouraging that!

Data Frank's avatar

That’s a beautiful realization.

It’s like each emotion finds its own language through you joy choosing words, pain choosing color.

There’s something really powerful in noticing that pattern… it gives you a deeper way to understand your own creative rhythm.

Canteloria's avatar

Lovely, Allison, simply lovely. And heartfelt for me as I am a creative and it’s part of who I am. I create because I *have to.* Please, please keep writing and share more of your work!

Allison Ink's avatar

It really is part of who we are. Thank you for reading and for sharing your perspective. I appreciate you.

Nat Sang's avatar

This is beautiful and it makes perfect sense for us writers.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you, Nat. 🖤

Nat Sang's avatar

You’re welcome

Letters to Self's avatar

Courage written on paper. Kudos to you for publishing and sharing your work with us.

"I create because something in me

refuses to pass through this life

without leaving a mark on yours."

FELT.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this. 🖤

Tianna Diamond's avatar

This hit me right in my gut! I always tell people, I create because I want to…but mostly because I have to. ❤️‍🔥

Allison Ink's avatar

Yes!! We are pulled into it, in many ways. Thank you for sharing how this impacted you. 🖤

Deborah Beach's avatar

The last four lines though....😭🩷 So beautiful. Thank you so much for being brave and sharing. I hope you post more of your poems!!

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you so much!! 🤍😊

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was fantastic. I know how nerve-wracking it can be sharing a poem for the first time (I have been doing it for a few months now and feel it every single time), but you really nailed that and I'd love to read more.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you, Gary. I’m so glad this landed with you and gave you some feels. I appreciate you. Thanks for being here. 🙂🖤

Original Worlds (Ira Robinson)'s avatar

First public poem? This both sparkles and devastates at once.

I often talk about how we writers are here to fight against entropy in every way we can, and you described that specific feeling eloquently.

Loved it.

Allison Ink's avatar

😊 Thank you for such a thoughtful perspective on my words. I appreciate you. 🖤

Alexandra Klein's avatar

It takes extra courage to share a poem publicly, being such a raw shard of ourselves. Congratulations on your first! I felt the lines about the brevity of life and refusing to pass through it without leaving a mark on others. 🫶🏼

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad those lines spoke to you. Thanks for taking a few moments to read. 🖤

Kelly Trost's avatar

Oh, so beautiful.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thanks for taking a few moments to read it. :)

Kelly Trost's avatar

I enjoyed it very much!

Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Oh this WAS fire. I can feel your passion! You are a giver with your writing. So generous! 🥹❤️

Allison Ink's avatar

A compliment of the highest order!! I so appreciate you. 🫶🏻🥹