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Story Time Wizard's avatar

I can't wait for more. I am curious to see where it goes from here. Mission accomplished.

Allison Ink's avatar

Thank you! I love hearing that. Perhaps it needs a sequel …

Dead Head's avatar

Such a thrilling punch of a story!!

Allison Ink's avatar

So glad you enjoyed!

James Winter's avatar

Nicely done twisted the main character fluidly from prey to predator. Ingenious.

Allison Ink's avatar

Why, thank you! 🖤

MissLissaWrites ❤'s avatar

Loved this ❤

Allison Ink's avatar

appreciate you :)

MissLissaWrites ❤'s avatar

Likewise Allison 🥰

Diana Shah ✦'s avatar

this pulled me in instantly. “a corpse of a house that perhaps wasn’t yet dead” such a striking image 🖤

Allison Ink's avatar

So glad you love that. Thanks for reading and for being here.

Virginia Curtis's avatar

Creepy and cool. I love this! Virg

Allison Ink's avatar

Thanks for reading!

Alicia's avatar

Atmospheric, visceral and wrong. What's not to love??

Allison Ink's avatar

So glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading.

Amber Estwick's avatar

This was amazing

Allison Ink's avatar

☺️ thanks for reading 🖤