As someone named Corrina, I was thrilled to flread a book with a character with my name for the first time. But halfway through the book the spelling changed to Corinna...inconsistently. (See sample photo.) There's a really well thought out 3 star review giving tons of examples of misused words throughout. So. Many. Please hire an editor. And seriously? If you lived at Haven House and Academy for the Enrichment of Young Women, you'd shorten the name. No one calls something so familiar by such a clunky name! I thought it was said way more than the 26 times it was mentioned because it was so ridiculous to see it. Also, where did Mercy learn so many bad words, being raised at a sheltered girls' school? Now for the spoilers... The couple basically falls in love at first sight. There's no reason for them to be in love, just poof. He tells himself he can't be with her because his father always warned him not to take advantage of his position over women he employed--they can't say no without risking their jobs. Yet when he announces his engagement to Mercy his parents are immediately overjoyed he has found love and they never question if she actually wanted it. And I just didn't believe their love story overall, it was all lust and no love. The storyline of Benjamin is weird and out of the blue if you only read this book. Or, maybe there's more logic to it if you read the first...Hopefully? The whole Haven House thing is weird to me. If the whole ton knows its for illegitimate kids, and if governesses who are illegitimate are too scandalous to hire, then how can Haven send out letters of recommendation to families and have these women be hired? Do they only send them to backwaters and pray the family never travels to London or meets with the upper class? And why on earth would you give names that hinted to their real identities if you promised (and were paid for) discretion? Did she assume none of these women would ever be governess for aristocratic families? But wasn't that the point of their training? Basically I generally liked the book (or I'd have stopped midway) until it wrapped up in a neat bow in the last 50 pages, despite there being so much to resolve. It was all just magically okay instantly. No thanks.