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Original Worlds (Ira Robinson)'s avatar

Well, that's one way to get proven wrong. Good one!

Rebekah Vesper's avatar

Oo this one got really visceral. Loved the ending!

Aidan Alan's avatar

Thank you, glad you enjoyed

Bryan Ritchey's avatar

Oof, what a conclusion. Seems like the ghost was channeling Marie's contempt for those people.

I.P.'s avatar

I JUST LOVELOVE LOVE YOUR PROSE! I was chilled, spooked, the amount of detail was absolutely insane I am just in awe!! God when’s the next book coming out Aidan

Darker Ink's avatar

Thoroughly enjoyed this! Nice job.